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binary readme: fix typos and grammar

Thomas Waldmann 1 周之前
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      docs/binaries/00_README.txt

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docs/binaries/00_README.txt

@@ -8,27 +8,27 @@ any dependencies.
 Download the correct files
 Download the correct files
 --------------------------
 --------------------------
 
 
-amd64 / x86_64 architecture
+AMD64/x86_64 architecture
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 
 borg-linux-glibc236 Linux (built on Debian 12 "Bookworm" with glibc 2.36)
 borg-linux-glibc236 Linux (built on Debian 12 "Bookworm" with glibc 2.36)
 borg-linux-glibc231 Linux (built on Debian 11 "Bullseye" with glibc 2.31)
 borg-linux-glibc231 Linux (built on Debian 11 "Bullseye" with glibc 2.31)
 borg-linux-glibc228 Linux (built on Debian 10 "Buster" with glibc 2.28)
 borg-linux-glibc228 Linux (built on Debian 10 "Buster" with glibc 2.28)
-                    Note: you can also try them on other Linuxes with other glibc
-                    versions - as long as the glibc is compatible, they will work.
-                    If it doesn't work, try a borg 1.2.x binary.
+                    Note: You can also try them on other Linux distributions with different glibc
+                    versions - as long as glibc is compatible, they will work.
+                    If it doesn't work, try a Borg 1.2.x binary.
 
 
-borg-macos1012      macOS (built on macOS Sierra 10.12 with latest macFUSE from brew)
-                    To avoid signing issues download the file via command line OR
+borg-macos1012      macOS (built on macOS Sierra 10.12 with the latest macFUSE from Homebrew)
+                    To avoid signing issues, download the file via the command line OR
                     remove the "quarantine" attribute after downloading:
                     remove the "quarantine" attribute after downloading:
-                    $ xattr -dr com.apple.quarantine borg-macos.tgz
+                    $ xattr -dr com.apple.quarantine borg-macos1012.tgz
 
 
 borg-freebsd13      FreeBSD (built on FreeBSD 13)
 borg-freebsd13      FreeBSD (built on FreeBSD 13)
 borg-freebsd14      FreeBSD (built on FreeBSD 14)
 borg-freebsd14      FreeBSD (built on FreeBSD 14)
 
 
-*.tgz               similar to above, but built as a directory with files,
-                    not as a single self-extracting binary. using the directory
-                    build is faster and doesn't need as much space in the temp
+*.tgz               Similar to the above, but built as a directory with files,
+                    not as a single self-extracting binary. Using the directory
+                    build is faster and does not require as much space in the temporary
                     directory as the one-file build.
                     directory as the one-file build.
 *.asc               GnuPG signatures for *
 *.asc               GnuPG signatures for *
 
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Please check the GPG signature to make sure you received the binary as I have
 built it.
 built it.
 
 
 To check the GPG signature, download both the binary and the corresponding
 To check the GPG signature, download both the binary and the corresponding
-*.asc file and then (on the shell) type, e.g.:
+*.asc file and then (on the shell) type, for example:
 
 
     gpg --recv-keys 9F88FB52FAF7B393
     gpg --recv-keys 9F88FB52FAF7B393
     gpg --verify borg-freebsd.asc borg-freebsd
     gpg --verify borg-freebsd.asc borg-freebsd
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ The files are signed by:
 Thomas Waldmann <tw@waldmann-edv.de>
 Thomas Waldmann <tw@waldmann-edv.de>
 GPG key fingerprint: 6D5B EF9A DD20 7580 5747 B70F 9F88 FB52 FAF7 B393
 GPG key fingerprint: 6D5B EF9A DD20 7580 5747 B70F 9F88 FB52 FAF7 B393
 
 
-My fingerprint is also in the footer of all my borgbackup mailing list posts.
+My fingerprint is also in the footer of all my BorgBackup mailing list posts.
 
 
 
 
 Installing
 Installing
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ If you need "borgfs", just also symlink it to the same binary, it will
 detect internally under which name it was invoked.
 detect internally under which name it was invoked.
 
 
 On UNIX-like platforms, /usr/local/bin/ or ~/bin/ is a nice place for it,
 On UNIX-like platforms, /usr/local/bin/ or ~/bin/ is a nice place for it,
-but you can invoke it from every place by giving a full path to it.
+but you can invoke it from anywhere by providing the full path to it.
 
 
 Make sure the file is readable and executable (chmod +rx borg on UNIX-like
 Make sure the file is readable and executable (chmod +rx borg on UNIX-like
 platforms).
 platforms).
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ platforms).
 Reporting issues
 Reporting issues
 ----------------
 ----------------
 
 
-Please first check the FAQ and whether a github issue already exists.
+Please first check the FAQ and whether a GitHub issue already exists.
 
 
 If you find a NEW issue, please open a ticket on our issue tracker:
 If you find a NEW issue, please open a ticket on our issue tracker:
 
 
@@ -82,6 +82,6 @@ There, please give:
 - a good description of what the issue is
 - a good description of what the issue is
 - a good description of how to reproduce your issue
 - a good description of how to reproduce your issue
 - a traceback with system info (if you have one)
 - a traceback with system info (if you have one)
-- your precise platform (CPU, 32/64bit?), OS, distribution, release
-- your python and (g)libc version
+- your precise platform (CPU, 32/64-bit?), OS, distribution, release
+- your Python and (g)libc versions